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I need help revising my story but i’m super busy and haven’t have time to do it. Can you do it for me? I could here the roar of the audience, by the sound I knew it was a full house. I was practicing my voice by doing the usually Do Re Mi, the rest of band were behind also practicing. I could hear Dean drumming on the brick wall, I could hear Adam playing his bass, I could hear the strums of Sam’s Guitar and the sounds of the keys as Castiel played his keyboard, but most of all I could hear my heart beating as fast as a cheetah. I could feel the rush of adrenaline running through my body, my palms were sweaty and my breathing was heavy. I felt someone put a hand on my shoulder, it was Sam’s hand. I turned around to see a clearer view of him, the expression on his face was claim but his eyes were full of excitement. “Hey it’s going to be fine, stop worrying so much.” I bet he only said that because he could feel my heart beat even though he was only touching my shoulder. “But what if I mess up on the words and what if I fall while walking up to the mic WHAT IF I DROP THE MIC! What if-” Sam cut me off by putting his finger over my lips. “You won’t, trust me okay! Just take some deep breaths and you’ll be fine.” “Dude you’ll be great.” Dean said as he took a break from beating on the wall. “Yeah Ilana you’ll be amazing! You’re one of the greatest singer I have ever know.” Cas said this as he walked over. He had something behind his back but I couldn’t see what it was. “Close your eyes, i’ve got something for you.” I did as Cas said. I felt him place something on top of my head, it was light and smooth. I opened my eyes to see what it was, I could see what it was in the mirror on the wall in front of me. A flower crown! There were white daisy, pink roses, purple lavender, and little pink and yellow flowers all around the crown. “For luck.” Cas said. He was smiling wide as I was. It was so beautiful I didn’t know what to say so I just gave him one of my biggest hugs. I was about to say something but a we were called on to stay so all I got to say was ‘thanks’. The crowd went silent as we walked on to the stage, there were the only sounds of our foot steps and some coughs from the audience. We all got into our position, I waited for everyone to get settle with their instruments. Everyone was staring at me, I could feel their cold looks pierce my body as if they were throwing knifes at me. I turned around to get the okay from the band, they were all set and ready to play. “Hello and thank you for coming to night, we are the Team Free Will, we have many songs we have written but before we play you these songs there is one song we would like to play, you all probably know and if you know the words you’re welcome to sing along.” Cas began to play his keyboard, the sound of his keyboard was familiar and before they could say what is was I began to sing. ” Just a small town girl livin’ in a lonely world. she took the midnight train going anywhere.” The crowd began to scream as I singed these words. Sam took a step toward to his mic and began to sing the next verse. ” Just a city boy. Born and raised in south Detroit. He took the midnight train going anywhere.” He began playing his guitar and Dean and Adam joined in. I started to sing again. ” A singer in a smoky room. The smell of wine and cheap perfume…For a smile they can share the the night-” Sam joined in and sang along together. By this point the whole crowd was singing along. Dean was playing the drums, Adam was playing the bass, Castiel was playing the keyboard, and Sam was playing the guitar while singing along with me. “Don’t stop believin’.” Really don’t stop believing, if you believe you can do something you can, and sometime friends help you believe.